[urb1ne]

well, the guys you were with were a little uneasy, but thats there first, i say thumbs up. go ahead.

[JAKE_bloodlust]

yea kinda corny but keep making them i suggest one where you show what to do if you had to strike first

i mean it is hard to make these un-corny

[FatDom]

agreed. it is difficult to make vids like this un-corny, but it's a good concept and you should make more. i'd personally like to see how to defend against an opponent wielding a weapon, or better yet, a varying multitude of weapons...the possibilities are endless

Rock on fellas...

FatDom

[DoomRater]

So who was the big guy? I caught Mike and Shane but...

Totally loving it over here.

[Smithy]

yeah, lot more realistic there and a good real life scenario. as jake said i think, make one where you have to strike first. I wanna see some blunt force trauma fighting ;D

lol, i'm shane, i'm (load grunt), and i'm mike..... i'll watch the rest now, just had to point that out lol.

oh and you're voice is normal... VERY disapointed, i really wanted to here what a cross between Arnold Swarzneggar(i defy anybody to spell that!) and an 8 year old girl would sound like.

LMAO 'bite his hand'.

OK here's me being a dick... sorry!

it covered too much ground, and it did it too briefly, you'd make a good point like don't give him you're back, but then you would move on, you wouldn't stress it enough in my opinion, you did this alot.

Also the conclusion was all over the place, just random attacks.

and tho you'd show how you'd deal with it you wouldn't explain enough, for example, you threw the first guy, i'm here thinking cool, how and why did you do that? but then you hop to 'keep one behind the other'. it was all very fast paced.

my advice, have a basic script, then it will stick to the point, and definatley have exactly what you want the video to cover, written down before hand.

I'm really sorry and (although it doesn't sound like it) i was really impressed with the video. i'm also aware it was just a test, i'm just trying to say it could have been structured better. but really good vid very helpful.

[Smithy]

oh yer bloke, on that point > i also think you didnt point out 'how' you through him. that would put the icing on the cake for this video if some 'hows' were done.

does he say 'i'm thor'? cuz that would be too perfect!

[Juno]

lol, thorne is his name. real name, too. thanks for the criticism. would you want more vids though?